Goal- Choose and retell my own story
-Write a story with a clear beginning,middle and end
- Always use poetic language to add description
- Sam is play on his sisters phone on a farting app then he kept laughing
- Then suddenly long slimy tentacles came out of the toilet and it got the phone from Sam because it heard Sam laughing
- But then when it got the phone and went down the toilet Sam flushed himself down the toilet into the sewers
- He got a ride on a crocodile to catch up to the sewer monster
- Then he got into the sewage monsters cave sewage monster about a agreement it was if I have the iPhone back then he would show the sewage monster and his family a even funnier trick
- He put his arm under his armpit and did a fart
- Then the sewage monsters laughed at him
- And then that is how they became friends
Sam was playing on his sisters phone on a farting app to think that his family would think he was on the toilet. He kept doing that and cracking up every time he did it but he didn't notice a long slimy tentacle coming out of the toilet, it was long, it was also very green. It came out because the sewage monster had heard him play the farting noises on the iPhone. So it leaned out of the toilet and grabbed the iPhone out of Sam’s hand and then he flushed himself down the toilet so Sam flushed himself down the toilet as well and into the sewers.
When he was in the sewers he hopped onto the nearest crocodile and chased the sewer monster into it’s cave. Then when he got into the cave he had to be extra quiet. But when he peeped behind a boulder the sewer monster saw him so he had to come out of his hiding place. When he came out the monster gave him a scary grin it was very scary. But then he decided to do a deal “if you give back my sisters iPhone then I will something even funnier so he did he did a armpit fart and the sewage monsters cracked up laughing and tried doing it and it worked. So from that day on they became best ever friends.
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