Writing goal settings

Goal - Always use poetic language to add description (simile,alliteration,exageration,personification).

Reason- I chose this goal because I forget to use similes,alliteration exaggeration and personification in my writing and I also think it will make my writing more interesting.

Speech board reflection

Speech board reflection


What I spoke about - I spoke about a highland dancing championship. I did where  you can focus and smile. and what I won and what I think is an  opportunity.

What I did well -I spoke very fluently and I was very confident when it happened because there was only the person judging me  and Leah.


How I would improve my presentation next time - Put a little bit more of
information into it.

Big vs Bigger

Big vs Bigger - Complete story from Ministry of Education on Vimeo.

W.A.L.T - retell stories in our own words.


- Organise our witing with a clear beginning,middle and end.

- Use google apps for online writing.

In Huntly village  there was a big kid called Sean,he ruled the neighbourhood. He was a bully because he lifted a bus and tipped out all the kids and then he stole the chicken nuggets out of the kid’s lunch box. That was until Big Steve an even bigger kid moved into the neighbourhood. Big Steve was bigger than a rhino, he was utterly huge.

Then Big Steve saw that Sean had chicken nuggets so he started to yell “BIG STEVE WANTS THE CHICKEN NUGGETS” but as quick as a whip Sean gulped them down.When Big Steve saw the chicken nuggets were gone he looked in his bag and saw a can of pink paint so he paid back Sean by tipping the pink paint all over him. Big Steve saw the kids laughing and he said “stop that laughing or you will be next.” After that the kids knew they had to make a plan because the big kids had been bossing them around for too long. So they huddled up and made a plan. Once they had thought it out they put their plan into action. They called up the inflatable chicken nuggets company to deliver some to them right away. Then when they came, Sean and Big Steve they guzzled them up. When they had finished they burped and started to blow up. When the kids saw they were blowing up they said “now we can play volleyball”, but when they started playing Sean and Big Steve started to float up into the air. They were far up in space and were scared They said to each other “we are going to have to help each other, see that satellite there we are going to go straight for it three, two, one that's go”,so they did. Then as soon as they had touched the satellite they popped and flew back down to earth again. When they landed, they were smaller than before. The kids were surprised to see them back  so soon. Then they heard loud footsteps. It was a even  bigger kid than Big Steve. His name was big Stuart.

The end

Chicken writing

Handwriting Reflection

W.A.L.T complete a piece of handwriting displaying my best work.

 Set learning goals to improve my handwriting.

What did I do well? I Formed my letters in the correct shape and I neatly ruled off on the line in my work.

What are my next steps? Slope my letters consistently and show neatness and care in presentation.

Calf and Lamb Day Reflection

W.A.L.T- Reflect on our  calf and lamb day work.

What  I did-  This year I made a rock art ladybird. First I had to get a rock and then Mrs Fergus put white spray paint on it. I had to find a picture of a ladybird and drew it onto my rock. The next day we coloured them in with felt. We also used a white paint pen. We also had to name them I called mine Leafy.

What  I would change-I would change the colours like a pink to a red because pink doesn't stand out.

Other comments- I am proud of myself that I finished in the limited time.